Tuesday, November 03, 2009

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The only reason why you love me, well loved me, was perhaps the shameless honesty I maintained between us. It was almost like being naked. Talking naked? The point is, yes I wanted you to go away and all that. That was when you were madly in love with me. I hated it. But I knew I would be desperate once you go. Forever only, mind you! Yes, we are indeed talking about forever going away. So I am desperate now.

Why don’t you love me? Madly?

Why don’t you tell me it’s killing you when I avoid you?

Why don’t you sing me Blunt’s ‘Your beautiful’?

Okay, fine. I will let you touch my feet because you like the color of my nail paint. I won’t say ‘no’ this time.

I will even let you smell the perfume on my neck. I won’t say ‘no’.

I promise. I wont.

Only if you stay where you are maybe. I don’t know. You have gone forever haven’t you?

14 comments:

lizzie said...

intense.painful

Sands | കരിങ്കല്ല് said...

soul...

this IS intense...

And the stupid person in me is able to relate to this all! :( :(

A Liberated Soul said...

Lizzie, hey you have a new name. Hows u been?

Sands, I appreciate your patience to read and understand my posts. Honestly I think sometimes how is that a techie like you likes my blog. Now that love is in the air maybe you could relate to my older posts too :)

peter ivan said...

When the wall on which you lean crashes you fall into the Abyss

Sands | കരിങ്കല്ല് said...

Love was in the air... not anymore :(

:)

A Liberated Soul said...

Peter, could relate? Right?

Sands, that's bad.

Kripssmart said...

No philosophies from me this time...

I am an actor..Not worst but still not the best.. Trying to become better as I flip/slip through..

But my acting starts questioning me at times when I go through such posts...

Kripssmart said...

Am I the last one Soul?

take care!

A Liberated Soul said...

Kripssmart, your an actor?

Kripssmart said...

haha.. soul.. :)

mrniiiceguy said...

were is my rain goddess ???

A Liberated Soul said...

Mrniiice, I am glad you remembered me when it rained. X-mas is getting closer. U remember?

'Last Christmas I gave you my heart..'

mrniiiceguy said...

lol ... did you ???

i cant help laughing after reading this post, u know the smiley that rolls on the ground and laughs !!!

i liked it by the way !!!

A Liberated Soul said...

MrNiiice, :/ whats to laugh? That too rolling on the ground?