Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Off to never never-land

Now the other world will be only a dream for you. You will see a dream once in a while about an intense love, drug cigarettes and some slow guitar. You will remember me and want me. All this will bring you here. Right here to my blog.

You will search for yourself here and I know I will see a desperate man then. A man whom I know never wanted light but nights. Nights when we smoked more love than drugs. Kisses that gave the taste of blood. Each other’s blood. A love like raw.

When you are tired and about to leave I will come to liberate you. By then I am sure you won’t wait or want me. You will just want to get back to living life. And not a dream.

Because I am a dream. In past, present and future.

Exit light

Enter night

Take my hand

We’re off to never never-land


Sands | കരിങ്കല്ല് said...

soul... :)
it is very nice..

(Exit light Enter night) - could be avoided though. I think, it's unnecessary to say...

Wont just (Take my hand.... ... never-land) do?

A Liberated Soul said...

Sands thats a good suggestion. I might re-do!

Nitin said...

gud u r back... well as usual haven't got this... will read again once free..

Srishti Padathiyaar said...

Raw as you said.

Waiting for a new post :-/

A Liberated Soul said...

Nitin, I wish you wer nvr free :)

Srishti, u like it raw? I like too!

Nitin said...

thats why u blocked me on chat :)

A Liberated Soul said...

Nitin, I did?

peter ivan said...

Extremly intense ,like reading the wasteland of eliot

mrniiiceguy said...

i have always been surprised by this streak of your writing style ...

When you say "i am a dream" ... is it that you are someone elses dream or the whole thing is a dream ? you started of with "the other world - will be - only a dream for you... vibes a bit differently

A Liberated Soul said...

Peter, :)
MrNiiice, well the other world is a dream for most ppl. So for me its a real world and others who are not part of it will feel like its a dream. Which indirectly means I cud be a dream to them. Vibes?